FYI, I've received emails from C5, Cut and Cpt Lundgren. I've glanced at Cut's and Cpt's characters, and they look fine on the surface. I'll give them a more thorough study later this week.
C5, I'm just now getting to looking at the Shaltz. I'll probably have a response for you later this week, as well. 
James, I'll PM you about your character this week, as well. I have a couple ideas to share with you based on your posted concept.
Thanks, everyone, for being patient with the busy prospective-Narrator.
Davy Jones
"Frightened? My dear, you are looking at a man who has laughed in the face of death, sneered at doom, and chuckled at catastrophe! I was petrified."
-- The Wizard of Oz