Thanks for the kind words, Orville. Sharing with the Trek community here is something I've been wanting to do, since so many here have inspired me with the work they have shared. I hope you continue to enjoy and if you get a chance to share some more tales of your own.
I didn't do any tinkering mechanics-wise to the core settings, just character development options for colonists.
The sad part about Naderi is that I had done some work developing a Mars training mission, heavily influenced by the movie Total Recall and my own perception of Trek's Mars as sort of like the post-Reconstruction American South. I always figured from the few canon clues we are given about Mars is that they were proud colonists who'd won their independence from Earth, only to get sidelined when the Federation was formed. The way I figure, Mars was probably important in the Earth-Romulus War, but when the Federation was established and the guidelines for membership meant that a low-population planet like Mars was not eligible for membership. Their only recourse to entry was as an Earth outpost. And the bitterness ensued.
My Mars mission was heavy with political intrigue, and since the Collision Course elements and the cadets one mission outside the Sol system had that, I didn't want to overdo it. Since I hated to see the Mars plans go to waste, I decided to bump that scenario to the Starfleet Academy mini-series for the TOS-movie crew.