I notice that in all your plans. You are focusing on causing a rift in Starfleet. One that was never really seen on screen. Even when it came to conflict, the most trusted person in Laytons group couldn't do it.
I do like your ideas so far. But instead of trying to schism Starfleet command, why not also include a Federation News Service reporter...
The very nature of the job will put them in the faces of your guys, if not at odds with. And could easily be someone that might cause problems requiring Leyton to act...
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