The most famous battle in TNG needs to be read for continuity and technical errors. I thought that there was no better forum that Trekrpgnet. Its 30 pages (two episodes) and is a fun read. Please Contact me at Starfleet63@aol.com if you would like to read rate and confirm this newest edition of STTVS.
Thundergod, I sent you an email a couple days ago expressing my interest in betaing your work. Not sure if you got it or not; my email's been wonky lately.
There have been about two dozen requests to read this short story. I might have just missed yours. Im sorry. just re email me and I will send it to you. And just wait till the pictures show up!
Okay the first set of beta reads is back and the main issue is about The Launch of the Voyager. In the story I show an intrepid class under construction in 2367. The voyager series started in 2371.
The Intrepid had just had the deckplates installed so she wasn't space worthy.
here is what i need clarified. When was Seven of Nine at Utopia Planetia. And when would be the earliest that an Intrepid class vessle could launch.
I have also had a few comments about the EMH, but I will say this. The EMH program was developed, most likely, over a period of years with several model and versions created. It is not unlikely that in late 2366 the first proposal to starfleet was sent to gain funds and resources to contiune its development.
Kirk could have found and copied the files and could very well have used them as she did.
Second question is an opinion.
Should the Endeavour be an intrepid class vessle
The series takes place on an Intrepid class starship called the Endevaour. It assumes that the Endeavour was lost shortly after its suppossed rondevous with the enterprise in season four. To keep with in cannon it will be the NEW endeavour that will appear at the first contact battle. (its a female voice too)
No one has mentioned this being an issue yet, but some recent posts in here about wolf 359 have made me leary about using that name. Please clarify any cannon referece to the Endeavour.
Last edited by Thundergod; 10-19-2001 at 12:16 PM.
Your crazy thunderd god..
(inset debate here)
I think you should go to
(insert random trek location here)
Cause only a retarded
(insert any agressor race here )
would think that the Endeavour was at wolf three five nine.
What kind of
(insert medical drug here)
are you on any way.
For gosh sakes you couldn't write a
(Targ shelat, or tribble)
out of a paper bag.
Heck my
(insert decrepit or new born family member here)
could write better than you !
Actually acording to canon and the Star Trek Encycolpeida, the Endeavour was the Nebula in the battle at the begining of First Contact, and she did survive the film.
Hope that helps.
Also I love your stories, but I can't email you from work. Could you send it to me at
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