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Thread: You just got Rick Berman's job...now what?

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    Cool

    Okay.

    First, some precautions :
    - Establish a definite ST timeline. Based on every episodes, books, fanfics, RPG books, websites, old notes from Roddenberry, whatever, and designed so that only a minimum of episodes will have to be nullified. This timeline would stretch from roughly 1960 to 2380.
    - Similarly, try to design some coherent map of the universe, populated with all the planets of every episodes. Have some coherent warp table.
    - Ask my arch-nemesis the right to write his name everywhere as executive producer, so that the fans will hit him and not me when something is not their liking (ie always )

    Now some guidelines for the writers :
    - The main characters of each series will be an equal blend of humans and aliens, and also more equally balanced between genders (not the "one babe, one chick, and lots of men" crew). Some children can be added too (but more like Jake Sisko than Wesley Crusher). Among the humans, try to have some cultural diversity, meaning that not all of them are from english-speaking countries and that the ones who aren't don't express their cultural diversity by speaking with a heavy accent or using foreign expressions or have some clichéd behaviour (no Chekov or first-season TNG Picard).
    - Equally balance the screen time between the main characters (who are not reduced to a Holy Trinity ). Have some continuity between episodes, with references to past episodes, character evolution, and no hesitation to kill or part from a recurring character. A regular cast member can also change sides, lose or gain ideals, and so on (think what DS9 did with Dukat and Damar). Have also many interesting semi-recurring characters.
    - Break the "seven seasons" series. If the writers can't find enough ideas for more than four seasons, then four seasons it shall be.
    - Avoid the "one-episode species, character or technology" syndrome. Once it appeared, it is part of the universe and will be seen again.
    - Write at the beginning of a series a rough guideline of what it will be, what will happen, and have some ideas of the main subplots (with enough room for improvisation of course). Same for the characters. This will allow for nice plot foreshadowings, strong and coherent characterisation, and avoid things like what happened to the Prophets between Emissary (what is this, it's linear...) and What you leave behind (Hi, son. We need you to kill Dukat).

    Now, the series. Two ideas :
    - One or two hundred years after Endgame. A new ship, maybe another Enterprise, is exploring the whole galaxy with a new transwarp technology. Only a few ship can travel with this system, so the crew is usually on their own. They may also be testing some new technologies, including time-travel (of what will eventually allow TimeFleet to exist). Some old threats are gone, other have remained, and new have appeared. The main villain of the series could be this time some part of Section 31 gone rogue.
    - Dawn of the 25th century. A colony ship has left Federation space, and is heading in a totally unexplored part of the Alpha Quadrant. No StarFleet here, everybody is civilian. They may take half the first season or the whole one to reach a satisfying system, wich makes them some months away from the Federation for the fastests ships. Now the colonists settle, face their differences, and discover their new home. Hostile or friendly (but always unknown) neighbours, strange aliens artifacts, dissensions among them, the occasionnal StarFleet vessel checking if everything is all right... and, possibly, some new galactic power these colonists discovered, and who, for a change, may turn out to be friendly, but only after some seasons of distrusts and mutual misunderstanding.

    Gah. I'd almost regret not to be really Rick Berman... at least I can apply that to my scenarios.
    Sorry if this was a bit long and sometimes redondant to other posts . I may add a few things later
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    Hey, Styro, thanks!

    I think if I were in charge, I'd hire C5 as my Continuity Czar - I couldn't agree more with his point about nailing down a coherent timeline, map, etc. That's so important.

    If I were going to do a Trek series from scratch...hmm...

    Idea #1 - a starship based series set 3-5 years after DS9. The galaxy is in chaos...under the leadership of Garak and the remnants of the Obsidian Order, Cardassia has become a (more) paranoid, reclusive police state. Thanks to Rom's mismanagement, the Ferengi government has fallen. Martok is barely holding onto power in the Klingon Empire. The Romulans are causing trouble, as are the Breen. And the Federation is stretched to the limit, still rebuilding after the war, trying to absorb new member worlds like Bajor, etc.

    Starfleet is also torn, between the desire to remain heavily armed and strong in response to old and new enemies; and the wish to go back to a more idealistic time when exploration and science were the primary missions.

    That will be the biggest cause of tension among our crew, some of whom will be Dominion War veterans, and some fresh out of the academy officers, as well as officers who served in the core worlds and never saw combat during the War.

    I think I agree with some other posters on here about going with an alien captain. I also agree about a more gender-balanced crew.

    As far as stories, arcs, etc. - personally, I'd opt for the Buffy/Farscape model of season long arcs. There wouldn't necessarily be one Big Villain every season, but at the least a general theme that would be emphasized.

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    I hate to say it, but this sounds a lot like "Space Above and Beyond"
    Well I wouldn't actually know. I have not seen the show. In Australia we are lucky to get Enterprise or any sci-fi show, although they are usually on late at night or early morning. I am not sure if it has been aired here and if it has then I missed it.

    So, the similarities are purely coincidental.

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    Originally posted by Liz Not Beth
    Simple: We've done the space-station and starship thing... now it's time to show life at HQ. A huge staff, each episode could bring in new characters, and we could go back and forth at will... Lots of cool story possibilities.... Earth under siege during the First Borg Unpleasntness, Earth getting whomped on by the Breen, Earth in a panic because the Borg are back... Normal day....

    The possibilities are endless IMHO.
    Cool. Star Trek: The West Wing.
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    Mr. Smith...allow me to be blunt...WITH A BASEBALL BAT...ST:West Wing...Aahk...barf...you sir are a sick and twisted indivigual...it's a good thing we keep you tied up here...

    "Starfleet Operations" Liz that's a wonderful idea, you could actually have the show overlap with the existing (now finished) series. Start the show at the height of the 5th season DS9 as one possability, if it lasts 7 years, the story could go from the worst of time, through the healing process, eventually ending up in a (hopfully) brighter future (no offence to every one, but this to me is starting to sound like a good idea for the U.S. market). The name could also be used to get away from the 'Star Trek' in the title issue Paramount seams to have trouble with as of late.

    Not all the episodes really need to take place with in the comfort of SFC's buildings either, on location with earth, try to show some of the other core worlds- (who wants to see the Andorian capitol- raise you right antenna), various starships, a few starbases, etc...

    As for new and interesting special guest characters (while not trying to sound B5 like) Federation councel members, ambassadors, what ever. The fans could really start to see and hear about all the other people that make up this thing called 'The United Federation of Planets'. Start to delv into the personalities of the various systems, the people, the cultures. Use what little has been said about culture X and expand on it, not as far as say the Klingons. Look at how things started to come out about the Romulans, what is making them tick as a whole, and a few on a more personal level.

    Ok I've deflated my ego now...sorry...
    Phoenix...

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    but maybe we should just remove all the safety lables and let nature take it's course"

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    I'd definitely have a non-human captain... I get tired of the rule they seem to have about how the captain always has to be a human. A Bajoran captain would be interesting.

    The show would revolve around a ship that is Starfleet's first transwarp ship that actually worked... so its continuing mission: to be the first Starfleet ship to explore beyond our galaxy. Sort of like a 25th century version of Enterprise, without the decom scenes
    "Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens."

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    I too would cancel Enterprise and replace it with something different than the usual Star Trek. Maybe "Star Trek: Romulan", something that shows not just crews on ships of the Empire but also the inner workings of the Romulan government. There would be so much to explore and there would be lots of room to maneuvere the plot into.
    If that doesn't work, I might try to make a series that examines the workings of one ship an episode, not sticking with the same crew day in, day out. This way, different parts of Starfleet could be shown, such as space lane patrols or the the older ships falling apart etc

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    With Enterprise having just ended it's run, I'd put Nicholas Meyer and Harve Bennett in charge of Enterprise films.

    I would also put Ron D. Moore, Ira Steven Behr and Hans Beimler in charge of DS9 films, collaborating alonside Marco Palmieri at Pocket Books to create a single continuity.

    Then, I would create two Star Trek series. One would be Excelsior... we need a movie-era regular television series. It would focus upon all the changes from the 23rd to 24th century and keep a mix of serialized yet independent episodes ala Enterprise.

    The other would probably take place in the latter half of the 25th century and focus upon an idea that was considered for DS9 and ultimately abandoned... a planet-based show. It would focus on a Federation starbase at a as-yet undecided planet (Betazed, Andor, Cardassia, perhaps?), and the main characters would include a couple of Starfleet officers and a couple of ambassadors (think B5 in terms of the characters' wide variety of positions - officers, ambassadors, aides, etc.). It would be very serialized.

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    Originally posted by Phoenix
    Mr. Smith...allow me to be blunt...WITH A BASEBALL BAT...ST:West Wing...Aahk...barf...you sir are a sick and twisted indivigual...it's a good thing we keep you tied up here...

    Hey, who tied me up? Let me out!

    Ok, you didn't like ST:WW, so how about a Trek series based around a group of wierd and wacky JAG officers who defend wierd and wacky cases - ST: Lieutenant McBeal?

    Wait, Phoenix, keep that baseball bat away from me! Don't hit me. No more ideas, I promise!"
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    I would start just like everyone, to sack Braga.

    After that, I would start with C5's ideas for continuity, wich would occupy all my proffesional time for two or three years. At the end of that Trek-less period, I would bring out the Trek Bible, so that everyone understood what is the real TREK-UNIVERSE.

    After that, I would approach the crew of DS9 and ask them to please reconsider and do a miniseries. I would give them the ending the show really deserved.

    After that, I would hire a small team of star writers and TOGHETER
    we would start to create a new series, Something really new. I would want to do it like Roddenberry did it with TOS, it shouldn't have to be afraid to be cotroversial. It should be about our lives. Our problems and how they are handled in the future. Remember the first interracial kiss on TV? This would take me another year (an a half?) Also during the creating process, I would go out there and meet with the fans. I would let them tell me, what they want, instead of going against them.

    Many of your Ideas I would use and implement them into the new show.

    I really think, that in order for Star Trek to survive, it should be laid to rest for a couple of years. Also continuity should be brought back. And listening to the fans who have made Star Trek great, couldn't hurt the franchise either.

    But how great a show you make, you NEVER can make every-one happy.

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    Originally posted by Mischartac
    But how great a show you make, you NEVER can make every-one happy.
    Tell that to B&B. If they stopped trying to make everybody happy, maybe they'd get a good show by some chance.
    "Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens."

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    Originally posted by Greg Smith


    Hey, who tied me up? Let me out!

    Ok, you didn't like ST:WW, so how about a Trek series based around a group of wierd and wacky JAG officers who defend wierd and wacky cases - ST: Lieutenant McBeal?

    Wait, Phoenix, keep that baseball bat away from me! Don't hit me. No more ideas, I promise!"
    ROTFLMAO!!!!
    Phoenix...

    "I'm not saying there should be capital punishment for stupidity,
    but maybe we should just remove all the safety lables and let nature take it's course"

    "A Place For Everything & Nothing In It's Place"

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