I like the sheet ALOT more compered to the one in the PG. One suggestion though, add more space for skills. Remember, that alot of the skills can have many specilites to them and we can all have more then one language.
When I'm learning a new game I start by making a sample character, one that I probably won't ever use but helps me learn the process. Anyway, in my typical fashion I got really high rolls all around so my sample start with *22* species skills, which is before I even went into his personal and professional packages. When he was finished and it was all said and done he had 5 differant knowledge skills with one of them having two specilites and 2 specilites in system ops. Those two alone would mean I'd have to go to blank paper to record them and then jump back and forth as needed to get the info. So definitally more space for skills, I'd vote for an entire page for skills.
And yes, I like the color scheme to, it's light enough where you can print it out (and photo copy) and still beable to read. Can't wait for it to be done!
Kyle