Just showed the players this sheet; they really like this one. We liked the flow of Don's but I doubt it's getting finished any time soon.
I agree Joe's comment on the RPG name thing...but I'd just leave it out completely -- maybe use the space as a another 'notes' area. Just a suggestion; it looks great either way.
Great job, Lancer!
"War is an ugly thing but not the ugliest of things; the decayed and degraded state of moral and patriotic feelings which thinks that nothing is worth war is much worse. A man who has nothing for which he is willing to fight, nothing which is more important than his own personal safety, is a miserable creature and has no chance of being free unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself."
John Stuart Mill