This is an alternate version of Barahir's Ring (which may become the official version after a little feedback). It is an attempt to include Erestor's excellent canonical suggestions.
Alright, I'll try and list all the changes made:
Corrected Dates: In the Introduction, it previously read 1300 to 3017, and has now been corrected to 1975 to 2951.
Implausibility Eliminated: The Background has been rewritten so that news of evil has not been received by a Snowman but through Círdan's mariners.
Implausibility Eliminated: Getting The Heroes Involved has been slightly reworded as to reinforce the aspect that it would be best if the party is entirely or mostly Dúnedain.
Implausibility Eliminated: Scene 1, Scene 4, and Scene 6 have been slightly revised so that it is not the Witch-king rebuilding Angmar but a scouting band collecting Orcs.
Implausibility Eliminated: The Interlude has been slightly revised so that the party travels to Bree, then Fornost, then Northwards, instead of across the Ettenmoors.
Acknowledgment Eliminated: Erestor has been eliminated from the Acknowledgments list, as he has brought up way too many problems with Barahir's Ring. Just kidding, thanks a ton Erestor!
I think that's all... please give me your thoughts everyone, and if you are registered on this board Erestor, please tell me about anything I forgot to change or misunderstood.
Alright Erestor, here is the updated version, hopefully the last! Changes are:
Historical Fact Corrected: In the description of the Ring of Barahir, what read "the badge of Isildur" has now been corrected to read "the badge of Finarfin".
Implausibility Eliminated: The characters now traverse a snowy plain, and not a mountain, though there is a hill of snow.
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